I like your idea because it's something that we all can relate to--that feeling of "holy crap I'm screwed" and also the insecurity we feel when were missing something as important as our ID card! I like the comic strip because the drawings are pretty nice but maybe in the second part of the narrative you could've expanded a little more than just using the emotions. Maybe photograph faces expressing those feelings or use a sound that you relate with the emotion
I like your idea because it's something that we all can relate to--that feeling of "holy crap I'm screwed" and also the insecurity we feel when were missing something as important as our ID card! I like the comic strip because the drawings are pretty nice but maybe in the second part of the narrative you could've expanded a little more than just using the emotions. Maybe photograph faces expressing those feelings or use a sound that you relate with the emotion
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